SPARKS
by Bryan Borland
There’s something about rearranging the furniture
that really turns me on,
the controlled destruction of familiarity,
that sledgehammer moment of no going back,
then soon you’re sliding across the carpet on knees lubricated
with the sweat of creative energy,
delicately peeling away layers of existence, opening up the space
to wall-flesh never before caressed
with decoration or open-mouthed kisses,
pushing bare hands hard against the sofa fabric,
leaving thumbprints
indented in its skin, inching
corner to beckoning corner with grunts and groans,
muscled, twisted legs and contorted bodies
struggling to make it all fit inside
until everything finally comes together
with a growl of release,
the monotony broken,
a bit of living room kink
to paint everything anew.
© Bryan Borland
I really like the poem, the begining is excelent. And it is something wierd what happens with changing furniture, I agree with that.
‘A bit of living room kink’ = genius. You made me want some.
I’m hoping the lampstand didn’t get stuck in the fireplace.
hmmmmm after all that you must sit down and light up a cigarette. hahaha I love this, Bryan. Makes me want to move furniture…or something, but I don’t smoke.
Wow. This could be interpreted so many different ways. I really like “the controlled destruction of familiarity.” :thumbs up:
Socratesoul – gracias for the thumbs up!
You make everything sound so dirty! I like that in a man…:)
1writegirl – *wink*
You do make anything house/food-related so dirty, but in a good clean kind of way.
M’Lady, thank you for acknowledging that beneath the dirt and filth there is always an absolute clean-ness.
Only you could pull off these metaphors….Dig it.
Bindo – Metaphors? What metaphors?
Ha! I love this. I have an urge to change the room around, and then use the new configuration mercilessly.
This is a great example of taking something seemingly mundane on its surface and injecting it with poetic electricity.
I absolutely positively hate changing the furniture around. Freaks the entire house out (me, hubby, and cat). But you make it sound like a good workout. Something you do as challenge, but fun and you know the payoff will be worth it. Interesting. Nice.
Thanks for visiting, terrepruitt! I can empathize with concern over freaking out the cats!
That is the most erotic description of moving furniture I’ve ever read. You’ve proven that even the most mundane activities are naturally saturated with sensuality.
Thanks for the comment, Val! Time to rearrange soon?
An excellent poem Bryan. I’ll never look at furniture the same way again.
Thanks Scribulus! Nor should you!
Hello, Bryan!
I don’t know how you did it
bringing Helen Keller to my mind
now I find myself tripping over
words that won’t stand still
long enough for me to feed them
I like your sense of humor
It is certainly readable
Your philosophy is a sound one
You are a big success here, I see
Makes me think you were born to manage
whatever. Nice to meet you!
Uncle Tree
Uncle Tree – your comments are as clever as your poems.
cool
Great! I can totally relate to this, especially the part about “controlled destruction of familiarity.” The next time Justin asks why I moved the furniture, I’ll have to remember that line, which could be soon if he notices the rearranged dining room table and chairs.