Comments on: DESPLOME http://bryanborland.com/2009/07/04/desplome/ Sat, 12 May 2012 20:49:16 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.com/ By: 1writegirl http://bryanborland.com/2009/07/04/desplome/#comment-2293 Thu, 16 Jul 2009 02:15:26 +0000 http://poeticgrin.com/?p=2200#comment-2293 Ah Bryan, silly boy, you DO speak the language…

]]> By: benjaminchew110478 http://bryanborland.com/2009/07/04/desplome/#comment-2281 Wed, 15 Jul 2009 01:00:45 +0000 http://poeticgrin.com/?p=2200#comment-2281 Whoa…this is something different from your usual style.

I like the rhythm and beat of this work.

]]> By: Uncle Tree http://bryanborland.com/2009/07/04/desplome/#comment-2175 Tue, 07 Jul 2009 10:01:42 +0000 http://poeticgrin.com/?p=2200#comment-2175 The Yin and Yang of what goes up
must come down transformed, and disfigured.

Dreams of falling are quite common,
but you made this one rise up to the task.

Spirals are the new merry-go-round grounds
for scientists and poets alike. How smashing!

]]> By: Rachel http://bryanborland.com/2009/07/04/desplome/#comment-2141 Mon, 06 Jul 2009 16:01:12 +0000 http://poeticgrin.com/?p=2200#comment-2141 Great poem! I’ve never believed that dreams are meaningless and I think that, when analyzed, can be help to us in our waking life.

I love the line: “the ground coming up is the new sky reaching down”
For some reason it just seemed to ring so true to me.

A little creepy that we posted about similar things in the same week…I mean, really, are Spanish and death a natural pair or what??

Keep writing what you dream! It’s facsinating!

]]> By: poeticgrin http://bryanborland.com/2009/07/04/desplome/#comment-2139 Mon, 06 Jul 2009 15:04:45 +0000 http://poeticgrin.com/?p=2200#comment-2139 I am *so* excited to fly to Chicago next month!

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