New Poem: We Planted These Trees By Hand
by Bryan Borland
Dumbass 1 asks the questions
I hear most, Which one is the woman?
Which one do you call Ma?
I ask him back Which one of your parents takes it
from behind? Dumbasses 2 and 3 turn like wolves,
growling laughter. I get this, mostly from the guys,
girls, sometimes, too, when they travel
in packs and sharpen their teeth on anything
different: longer socks, new haircut, two dads.
I can see it in their eyes, though, jealous of my solid pair
to their awkward four, to their bickering three,
to their lonely one and weekend visits; no stepmonsters
in my house, just footballs and violins, rooms full
of the smell of baking bread and used books. I can name
the last 20 Secretaries of State. My batting average
is .385. I know my home wasn’t created
by a six-pack and a busted rubber. They fought
for me. They won. Who fought you into existence?
© Bryan Borland
So although not exactly the same, I sort of relate to this poem. When I take Jason home to my family gatherings, and of my age group / generation (all my cousins..there are lots of them) we are easily the couple that has been together longest. Everyone else has been married and divorced and no one is even close to the nine years Jason and I will celebrate this year. Just goes to show maybe we (“the gays”) do okay at staying together too, even if we cannot call it marriage. Great poem Bryan!!
Thanks WC! You make a great point… I think there’s an idea for a poem in there!
All of this is exceptional except for the last strophe. Can end it much better, I’m sure.
We’ll see about those last few lines, J. I’ll play around with it a bit. As always, when you say something, I listen.
Enjoyed the poem Bryan…but the people who ask such questions are hardly worth the time of day.
I’m jumping into the role of a teen with gay dads for a story/novel, and this poem was an expression of that exploration. Thanks for sending me the vid! Was exactly what I needed!
Thoughtful, beautifully phrased poetry, as usual.
Thanks Philip!
My two-cents worth: ended PERFECTLY, and well worth the time…to read, hear, and, most importantly, to say. Idiots, as most of us know, need constant reminding.
Thanks for this, Bryan. I loved it.
Thank YOU, Chucky Cheese!
nice read and very good points. thanks.
Thanks Sammy! Glad to have you visit!
Inspired by Zach Wahls? I’m glad that there’s a tone of pride and pity running under this, rather than anger (well, overt anger at least) and frustration. The high road, if you will.
(Lines 4-5: Bryan, you so sassy!)
You know, I didn’t seen Zach’s video until after I wrote this poem. This one came from a short story (maybe a novel) I’m working on narrated by Noah, the teenage son of gay dads. He told me he wanted to be the voice in a poem, and I obliged. Thanks to slpmartin for sending me the link to the vid!
Now you just made me realize I came from ‘a six-pack and I doubt any rubber was present’…great poem my friend…
Please, E! You came from a bottle of fine wine.
love the thoughtfulness of this, Bryan. love the tinge of playfulness, though a serious overall tone. i had a great laugh reading the last stanza…
Great to see you, the Talented Miss Bomi! Thanks for reading and hope you are doing well, my friend!
How did I miss this one? It’s great, one of my faves.
I though you’d like it, Tel.